The tall silhouette
Moving away
Towards the flash
Pulled compulsively
Like Icarus to Sun,
Wanting to touch
The fruit forbidden,
Supposedly sweet,
The pleasure
Inconceivable
Without seeming to care
About consequences
There
The thread tied tight
Around the being
Pulling hard.
P.S. I tried something new:A single thread poem; one which is a single line without any periods.
I dunno if it worked though. It might feel like a totally conundrum-y piece of writing. 🙈
It just felt kinda lyrical,the idea I mean. So.
Toodles!
~A♥~
This did turn out to be great after all. 👍😊
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Really? Thank you so much, AJ!💋
You’re damn sweet.:)
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Oh god! I’m not sweet. Thank you anyway. And yes it did. 😊😊
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Hello A, you are back? Good.
I think the poem is good. There is this line I think you should have made better.
“The Inconceivable pleasure” sounds better to “The pleasure Inconceivable”
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Well,not really. But in my defense, I did say I will pop in now and then.🙈
I still try to check WP for a few minutes. 🙂
Thank you so much, girl! 💋
Oh! Thank you so much for the suggestion,Deb! I really appreciate it.:):*
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Great…after long boring exam time I’m back on WP and its your post.
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Haha You’re always so sweet with your words. Thank you so much, Vishal!:*
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Do check my blog…
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I will.:)
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Gorgeous!
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Really? Thank you so much. :*
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Yes. You are a very good writer ♡ beautiful work♡
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Oh my! Why are you all so sweet?*sighs*
Thank you so much for the sweet, sweet words!💋
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Hugs♡
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*hugs back*
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Actually pretty…😊… Lol… Single line poem worked for you…
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Seriously? Thank you so much for the sweet words, Abhijit!:*
I am really thankful it did.:P
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Haha.. You are very welcome…😊
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🙂
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I get to learn many words from your posts 🙈🙈
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Hahahhahah I remember you mentioning sometime back that my posts are like English lessons to you. 🙈
It was kinda funny as well as a really awesome compliment. Thanks, again.:D
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That’s great… You are welcome…
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🙂
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Sometimes I just login into WP to see if you have posted anything new… And there’s not a time I have regreted.
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Oh my! You’re always so sweet. And your compliments are always beautiful.❤
I remember it was your comment on one of my posts that I just loved. It was the first time I had actually loved a comment and I seriously wanted a share button next to it. But, alas!*sighs*
And, mind you,there have only been a couple of such comments. 🙂
You’re so damn sweet. And kind.🙈
Thank you so much. 💋❤
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I swear my month has been too busy, exams and all,so ashamed I am replying this late, my apologies. Trust me when I say I am not sweet lol, but I do pay tribute where it’s due and i know just how much being appreciated means for a writer… You are good at what you do😍… Yea Yea i know that’s like the a millionth time I am saying this.
Cheers.
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Oh. My. God. I just saw this! I am so sorry,girl,but I didn’t get a notification for this, and hence had no idea you replied.🙈
As always,you are dayum sweet. Thank you so much for the sweet, sweet words! 💚
These words mean a lot to me!:*
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It is wonderful!
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Thank you so much for the sweet words! :*
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You’re very welcome! (:
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😀
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